Well, obviously I'm a pretty big fan of superhero-type characters who have some kind of mental illness. The idea that one side of his personality is good for some things and the other side if good for others is an interesting plot device -- I can see that working into a lot of cool situations. My one suggestion would be to work on his outfit a bit. He looks a little too much like Two-Face, and people are going to harp on that. Try and think of some other ways to show his duality than the business-suit-split-down-the-middle gimmick.

All in all, though, I think he shows promise.

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